Herman 2/18/10

I had't been paying attenion to my teacher in class,so whenth day of thr test arrived.I was worried.I was worried.That day was terribe. My teacher told me we had a big test.I didn't prepare for the test and I had not been listening in class.I thought there was just one way to pass that test:to cheat.In my class,every was taking the teset,but I was reading from a book under my desk. ThenI felt someone touch my shoulder.I saw teacher just standing there next to me. She told me to go to her office and she called my parents. I failed my test ,but I learned more than the knowlege test giving me.

m2-Kiki 2/11/10

Since i got into sinior high,i've learn a lot of things and grown up.Besides the study,there are a great number of activities that we need to enjoy.It;s really busy,but what we paid back are more than just busy.We can always find the happiness in the busy.And what i love the most is join in the rock band!

Jessie-2/11/10

Introduction: In our daily life, we can see many people chatting on iPhone, playing games with iTouch, listening to music with Nano, watching video on iVideo, or surfing the Internet with iMac. The Apple products has been a heat recently, it’s incredible and useful functions attract not only teenagers but also adults. Now every Apple fans are expected the latest one-the iPad which will be produced in March, 2010. Like other Apple products, three functions will make the iPad the most popular item in 2010.

Herman 2/11/10

Cheating is the worst thing when you are student.It make youget high score easily.You don't have to concerate for your study,and then you can't
stop cheating.Some students were thegood student before you started to
cheat,but when they found cheating is easy way to get high score.they started to cheat ,so the test system broke down.It was very important problem .We should think
cheating problem more serious than before.

Anna-2/11/10

When you were a student,did you wear a school uniform? If you are Taiwanese,I'm sure the answer will be "yes". When I wake up in the morning, I'll dress in my school uniform and quickly go to school.But if there weren't any school uniforms, maybe I would spend a lot of time finding clothes and be late for school. My school uniform has my school's name and my name on it, so it is easy to recognize who I am. There are still many students don't like to wear uniforms, because they think wearing uniforms isn't comfortable,fashionable or free. But in fact , there are some important reasons why wearing school uniforms is the right choice.

Jenny-2/11/10

Introduction: Have you ever came to Sheng Kung ? Whether you have a bad opinion of Sheng Kung , I suggest you go there at your free time . Sheng Kung is not too big , but you can see students everywhere in school . And the whole school is full of laugher that can warm your heart . So I would like to introduce the places that I like in Sheng Kung.

Charlie-2/11/10

The movie, Avatar, was released worldwide at the end of year 2009 and made the people all over the world crowded into theaters to watch the movie. It earned more than two billion US dollars and won the "Best Motion Picture Drama" in the 67th Golden Globe Awards. Though the plot isn't really special and there wasn't any big cast joining the filming of Avatar, three new technologies made it the best selling movie of all time.

Nana-2/11/10

Introduction:Is it really good for high school students to have boyfriend or girlfriend? In now days, many teenagers make a boyfriend or girlfriend during high school, even during senior high school. Some parents think it's too early, but other say it's an experience for teenagers. In fact, there are both good and bad effects on teenagers who have a boyfriend or girlfriend during high school.

Kiki-2/4/10

---intro
General statement:
Thesis statement:Playing in a rock band is kind of fun for me in several reason.

---Body 1

topic sentence:First reason is that music can really turn me into the good mood in any situation .

support-feel relax
-let the surrounding become colorful
-forget the pressure



---Body 2

topic sentence:Another reason is that we can have lots of special experiences .

support-settle the whole show by ourselves
-contest


---Body 3
topic sentence:The most important reason is that we can learn many things when playing the band.
support-knowledge of music
-how to match up with other player
-communicate

---Conclusion

Henry - 2/4/10

Outline

Intro

General Statement

Thesis Statement:

All of these types of transportations are convenient, but the most useful form of transportations is the automobile.

Body1

Topic Sentence:

Car is smaller than train or airplane.

Support

1. go everywhere you want

2. go deep into the city

Body2

Topic Sentence:

It's bigger than motorcycle.

Support

1. carry more things

2. people

Body3

Topic Sentence:

The most important is that almost everyone can buy it.

Support

1. easy to find

2. cheaper than a plane or a train

Conclusion

Herman 2/4/10

Intro

genemal statemats

Thesis Statemats:I all of the worst thing in the world cheating is the worst.
Body 1.
Topic sentence:cheating is like durg

support 1.if you start to cheat .its difficult to stop
2.you may get happy fot a while.
3.you dont know what is your problem
Body 2 .

Topic Sentence: cheating maketest system shake
support 1.hard-working students dont get their reward
2.cheating student get more education resource than hard-working students .
Body3.

Topic sentence: how to avoid cheating
support 1.test score cant be a standard with good or bad
2.personlality education is more important than score
3.dont rank
Conclution

Jenny-2/4/10

Introduction
General Statements
Thesis Statement: There are three places that I like in Sheng Kung.
Body1
Topic Sentence: One place is the teacher 's office.
Support 1.always full of students
Support 2.feel warm
Support 3.much food
Body2
Topic Sentence: Another place is Holy Church.
Support 1.very silent
Support 2.calm down and relax
Support 3.write down my wish on the paper
Body3
Topic Sentence: The last place is my classroom.
Support 1.help each other
Support 2.always full of laughter
Support 3.a good atmosphere to study
Conclusion

Charlie-2/4/10

Intro

General Statement

Thesis Statement: "Avatar" beat down "The Titanic" and become the most popular movie
on the history because three reasons.
Body1
Topic Sentence: The new tachnologies are really the biggest selling point of this movie.
Support: 1. newest 3D technology
2. digital modeling and animation
3. photography projects
4. more than 3000 visual
5. cost more than 300 million dollars

Body2

Topic Sentence: The great director, James Cameron, makes a wonderful movie again.

Support: 1. not only a director, but also the writer

2. special imaginary

3. know how to direct a great movie

Body3

Topic Sentence: Good actors translate their characters well and become bonuses to the movie.

Support: 1. Sam Worthington (Jake)

2. Zoe Saldana (Neytiri)

3. Stephen Lang (Col. Quaritch)

Conclusion

Jessie - 2/4/10

Outline


Intro
General statement
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Thesis Statements: Three functions make the iPad the most popular item for teenager in 2010.

Body 1
Topic Sentence: Ebook has become a widespread heat after the publish of iPad.
Support 1- IPS
Support 2- Multi-touch
Support 3- iBook

Body 2
Topic Sentence: Although Wi-fi connection is a general, no other’s quilty can compete iPad.
Support 1- mail
Support 2- Youtube
Support 3- Google map

Body 3
Topic Sentence: iPad’s various and considerable amount of apps catch everyone’s eyes.
Support 1- 140,000
Support 2- apps store
Support 3- Keynote, Pages, Numbers

Conclusion

Nana-2/4/10

• Topic: Is it really good for high school students to have boyfriend or girlfriend?
• Introduction
  General Statements-
  Thesis Statements: There are both good and bad effects to teenagers to have boyfriend or girlfriend at high school time.
• Body1
  Topic sentence: It is a good chance for the young to learn how to be along with heterosexual.
  Support1-
  Support2-
  Support3-
• Body2
  Topic sentence: However, most teenagers spend too much time on this puppy love, and impact to their schoolwork.
  Support1-
  Support2-
  Support3-
• Conclusion-

Anna 2/4/10

topic : School uniforms


General statements:

Thesis Statement: Most of the students in Taiwan wear school uniforms , and there are many reasons for this .


Body1
Topic sentence :to recognize the student
Surpport 1: number of students
2:to be responsible for themselves
3:not east to reconize between the rich and poor


Body2
Topic sentence: mornig routines much simpler
Surpport 1: late for school
2:nervous in the moring
3:have more time


Body3
Topic sentence :to concentrate students' attention on studying
Surpport 1:spend time on shopping
2:more time to study
3:fewer distractions on clothes

Jenny - Revised Paragraph

The most difficult experience I have ever had was acting in public without practice. There was a musical play in my class at school. We practiced every day and tried to do our best to present the personality of each role. The day we had to perform, everyone came. That morning, our director told me that someone needed time to change her clothes, so I needed to think of something to say before our dialogue. But I could not think of anything to say and I thought that it was very strange to say things by myself. When performing, I had no idea what I said for such a long time. Maybe I just read something for the latest newspaper and added some funny things in my lines. After the performance, many people said that the role I played was very funny. But they did not know that I did a improvisational performance at that time.

Charlie - Revised Paragraph

I have always tried to keep myself from crying in the movie theater, but one time I failed. Before that day, I thought that crying during a movie was really shameful. When my friend asked to watch the movie, “No Puedo Vivir Sin Ti”, I never thought I would cry, although many people said it was a impressive movie. But while I was watching the movie, I was touched by the scenes in the movie. Though I tried my best to keep my tears from falling, I couldn’t stop myself from crying when the main character cried out, “Society is unfair!” After the movie, I found everybody else had tears on their faces. Since that time, I never thought that crying in a theater is embarrassing.

Anna - Revised Paragraph

I had the most difficult experience of my life on a trip to an amusement park. I thought that it was the longest experience I have ever had. On my graduation trip to the amusement park, I was very excited about all the rides. But I was anxious about the rides that were very scary or too exciting. Although I was scared of them, I still rode a ride called “The Swinging Pirate Ship”. I screamed as loud as I could. Except for the pirate ship I mostly rode the slower rides like the carousel. I really liked one ride that was kind of a roller coaster, but it was in a dark place so you couldn’t see anything including the track. It was exciting but not scary. The most scary and the exciting ride I rode was a boat you can that went very high and quickly rushed down and splashed a lot of water on you. At first, I didn’t want to get on the boat but my friend said that it was not so scary. When I got on it I regreted it and I screamed and shouted, but it was too late. It went up and I began to close my eyes. Suddenly it went down. When the boat went down, I felt that was the longest time I had ever been on a ride, and I was very wet and cold. It was the most difficult experience of my life, but I think that it will be a good experience in my memory.

Jessie - Revised Paragraph

Cooking food completely is very important, and I suffered great pain to learn this lesson. During cooking class, our team cooked fried oysters. Unfortunately, time went by really fast. By the time we were done, there were only 10 minutes left for us to eat. “Ahh! What kind of disgusting taste is this?” my teammate said, spitting out the first bite immediately. “Are the oysters completely done?” The answer was no, but what choice did we have? We spread the sauce around as mush as possible to cover the raw smell. By midnight, I felt an ache in my belly, like a bear had punched. I visited my bathroom eight times that night and considered putting a pillow down to sleep here. I couldn’t even go to school the next day；I just ran back and forth to the bathroom. All my teammates stayed home that day, too. “That was the most ridiculous thing I’ve ever heard of,” said one of them, and we burst out laughing. We learned to cook everything completely by having diarrhea and vomiting for two days. Since then, I have sworn never to touch raw food again.

Nana - Revised Paragraph

Procrastination has always been the thief that robs me of my time. I always put off my homework until Sunday night, and this always makes me very busy the next day. I remember once I put off my work that was assigned on Friday until the next Monday. This made me very busy on that day, because every Monday, we all have a lot of tests. However, I not only have to take the usual tests but I also needed to finish my homework. Every breaktime, I just sat on my seat and wrote constantly. What’s worse, I even couldn’t sleep at naptime, because if I had slept, then I really couldn’t have finished all my work. It really was a terrible day. Since then, I have tried hard not to put off my tasks for so long. But it still happens on occasion

Kiki - Revised Paragraph

Friends have always played an important roles in my lifeand they have always taught me important lessons.i've been a shy girl who doesn't dare to express herself.But when i got into high school,i was suprised by how my friends could always say out loud how they felt and what they wanted! While they are voicing their opinionss,i'll wonder that why can it be so easy for them but so hardd for me?My best friend always tells me her deepest feelings. She can speak it out just like reading a poem.I love poetry but for me , it's really hard to read aloud.One day she told me that she she wanted to know what i was thinking .She didn't want to be the only one talking.After that , she often gave me some chances to say my opinions. My friends in the "HOT MUSIC CLUB" also give me lot of chances to speak on the stage . With their encouragement, i can now express myself easier than before .And i've found out that it's not that hard to show others who i am .