General statement:
Thesis statement:Playing in a rock band is kind of fun for me in several reason.
---Body 1
topic sentence:First reason is that music can really turn me into the good mood in any situation .
support-feel relax
-let the surrounding become colorful
-forget the pressure
---Body 2
topic sentence:Another reason is that we can have lots of special experiences .
support-settle the whole show by ourselves
-contest
---Body 3
topic sentence:The most important reason is that we can learn many things when playing the band.
support-knowledge of music
-how to match up with other player
-communicate
---Conclusion
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