Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Jenny-2/4/10

Introduction
General Statements
Thesis Statement: There are three places that I like in Sheng Kung.
Body1
Topic Sentence: One place is the teacher 's office.
Support 1.always full of students
Support 2.feel warm
Support 3.much food
Body2
Topic Sentence: Another place is Holy Church.
Support 1.very silent
Support 2.calm down and relax
Support 3.write down my wish on the paper
Body3
Topic Sentence: The last place is my classroom.
Support 1.help each other
Support 2.always full of laughter
Support 3.a good atmosphere to study
Conclusion

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