Charlie - Revised Paragraph

I have always tried to keep myself from crying in the movie theater, but one time I failed. Before that day, I thought that crying during a movie was really shameful. When my friend asked to watch the movie, “No Puedo Vivir Sin Ti”, I never thought I would cry, although many people said it was a impressive movie. But while I was watching the movie, I was touched by the scenes in the movie. Though I tried my best to keep my tears from falling, I couldn’t stop myself from crying when the main character cried out, “Society is unfair!” After the movie, I found everybody else had tears on their faces. Since that time, I never thought that crying in a theater is embarrassing.